5.17.2010

Essay 1st Self-introduction

I’m Eri Hamada. I’m from Kumamoto of town beside the sea. My family lives in there but only I live in grandmother house because I go to school as quickly. My mother often comes here which of every Wednesday, Saturday and Sunday.

I tell about my family. My father is an engineer of boat and a self-employed business owner. My mother helps him. I have an under brother. He is 9 years old. He belongs to soccer club. My pet is dog that is cute so a number of family. He name is Kaito. We love him.

I respect of my mother and father, of course. I have appreciation them. I want to…I have to filial piety.

My hobby is listening to music, watching TV, seeing a movie, going shopping, and do snowboard. I was often told “I don’t look like to do snowboarding?” and “Really?” by everyone. I have started it since I was 12 years old. At first time, my father took me the Geihoku in Hiroshima. I remember it was exciting then. It is fun for me to slide side of mountain quickly.

I challenge to do which to get TOEFL’s score well recently. I never had studies hard until now. I think that if you found pleasure or interest, you could look forward to study. I want to study abroad because I talk everyone in different countries.

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1 comment:

  1. Hi! I'm Yohei and one of the TAs.

    Your Essay is good, but you should be careful whether the singular or the plural.
    Please keep writing!
    Good luck!

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